2. In a previous assignment, you wrote an introduction article in the “F” pattern. Based on what we discussed in class and based on the feedback provided in class, write a new introductory “content” incorporating” plain English writing for the web” in the “F” pattern including visuals. You are to include your “revised version” (if the version you submitted was not in the F-Pattern). Ensure that it addresses the three main objectives of plain English writing. As a reminder, this is an introductory post for your business. Ensure you list it in your hardcopy. (12 Marks)
Old introduction article:
Vending Glow is all the products you would need in a vending machine. With everyday essentials, self-care and beauty products, Vending Glow has it all when you need it most! You will find our machines at your local gym, pilates studios, if you’re staying in a hotel or if you’re on a night out with friends. Public and traffic areas like downtown and the airport, where they are available 24/7. From skincare to makeup products like your favorite lipgloss or powder, to hair products and essentials. Whether you are travelling, visiting, working out or doing daily tasks, it is easy to forget essential products which is why our vending machines are always close or nearby. Our blog focuses on known and trusted brands that are also affordable, and you can get them at any time, one tap away. This blog is meant for educating, answering any questions or concerns you might have and give you helpful information about Vending Glow.
New introduction article:
Vending Glow Beauty Essentials – Anytime, Anywhere
Out and forgot something important? Vending Glow has your back.
Most requested and utilized products in a vending machine, from beauty to self-care and everyday essentials. Right where you need them.
What is in our vending machines?
- Makeup Products (foundation, powder, lipgloss, lipstick from Maybelline)
- Skincare and travel skin care (The Ordinary)
- Hair essentials (hair oil, shampoo, conditioner, gloss from L’Oreal Paris)
- Personal care products (deodorant hair brushes, hair ties from Dove and Goody)
These products are from well-known, trusted and affordable brands that work for everyone.
Where You Can Find Us
You can find our vending machines at:
- Local pilates, gyms and yoga studios
- Hotels
- Airports
- Clubs, bars and nightlife places
- Downtown busy areas
We are open 24/7 in public areas, convenient for everyone.
Why choose us?
- Quick and convenient – one tap away
- Less worries and stress when forgetting something
- Always a few minutes away when you need it most
- Made for people with busy lifestyles, full schedules
About our Blog:
Our Vending Glow blog is here to help you learn and find out more about our products and vending machines, and answer any questions you might have.
Affordable, Reliable and Easy
Whether you are traveling, working out, or just going out with friends,
Vending Glow is there for you anytime, anywhere.
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